But if it is totally implausible to you, it might be to others as well.
This is fiction right? You can do anything you like with fiction. I don’t think it really matters. Every parent who loses a child wants to see them again and the sooner the better. It gives hope to think it is possible, and it might be. I’m no one to judge that kind of thing. My point in bringing it up is that the third circle, besides breaking through animal legacy, also indicates that an individual has made it a habit by repeatedly choosing the ideals of the higher mind and acting them out. The third circle doesn’t come with one moment of spiritual illumination, it requires the whole personality wholeheartedly deciding over and over again. At least that’s how I understand it.
I think you should go into more detail concerning her background in the story, develop the character more. I had a writing coach once who told me people want to know more about other people in novels. Character development is key. We used to sit for hours jotting down the interesting features and qualities of every character. She said to completely develop every person in your mind before writing them into the story. With that in mind, I would eventually tell some stories of her selflessness and love of others despite her personal suffering, or whatever you think made her a spiritual prodigy. Surely, she would be one of the youngest from earth on the mansion worlds. That makes her a celebrity of sorts and everyone will want to know her in depth.
One other thing I forgot to mention yesterday is this quote I bumped into while looking for something else:
47:1.4 On the first mansion world all survivors must pass the requirements of the parental commission from their native planets. The present Urantia commission consists of twelve parental couples, recently arrived, who have had mortal experience in rearing three or more children to the pubescent age. Service on this commission is rotational and is for only ten years as a rule. All who fail to satisfy these commissioners as to their parental experience must further qualify by service in the homes of the Material Sons on Jerusem or in part in the probationary nursery on the finaliters’ world.
This isn’t a judgment day or a time of “accounting”, but it is a commission on the first mansion world that determines if parenting requirements have been fulfilled. Are your resurrectees parents? Since I only had two kids, I’m sure I’ll have to serve in the probationary nursery. It will be interesting to learn how my parenting skills are perceived on high. Family is a universe priority, I think. Also, maybe your resurrectees will get tapped to sit on the commission. I’m curious to know why recent arrivals are on the commission, maybe you know. Certainly, developing that plot would open up a lot of information, especially when they talk to other parents, both on the commission and those who come before the commission. There’s lots of stuff to write about that can shed light on family values. You say your prodigy had an excellent family; I think that needs to be explored, don’t you? At least that’s something I would like to read about, fiction or otherwise.
